In The Winter
1 12 2011My class is making books and they are based on When I was young in the mountians by Cyntha Rylant.We are doing small moments there not big moments there like when you you write about something that happen to you. But you focus on one thing that happen to you. When you go somewhere special you can only write about one thing that you did. My book is about in the winter and I always played with my brother a lot we had lots of snowball fights. We built a lot of snowmen they had a lot of cute hats on them. It was really fun I cant wait till it snows again.
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HAVE YOU EVER WROTE A BOOK?
i think you added a lot of detale.
I think you added a lot of detale aspeshaly well the hole book had a lot of detale and i loved the piters
Quinn,
To bad there is no snow. I am bummed to.
ELLIE
Dear Quinn
i reallylike how you did yourebit strip and how you made it with lots of words
I liked the story you wrote . Did you write the story in a piece of paper or did you just typed it on the computer?
I liked the way you wrote the story. Did you write in a picec of paper or did you just typed it in the computer? How many pages did you write?
I wrote it on a piece of paper then I typed it on the computer.
Hi Quinn,
I really enjoyed your story about your winter. It looks very fun to play.
Bye Jenny
Thank you for commenting on my blog that winter was really fun.
Your winter story is wonderful! We also like skating and skiing in Russia in winter. Can you skate or ski?
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[18:43:55] Калякина Ольга Николаевна: If you have time check out my blog http://kidblog.org/MrsFlowersClass3/author/Tatyana595170/.